帮我改作文,没找到一处错误加5财富,200封顶Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,Chinesefamily'slifehasahugechanges.People'slifebecomemoreandmorehappiness.Beforethen,ourcountrywaspoor.Sopeoplecouldn'thasenoughfood.theyh

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帮我改作文,没找到一处错误加5财富,200封顶
With the development of economy,Chinese family's life has a huge changes .People's life become more and more happiness.
Before then,our country was poor.So people couldn't has enough food.they has a little food to sustain their life .People in the past go to bed early ,because they has no any entertainment .In the past,they work on the field all the day.It's hardly and
triedly job,but they has no choice.
However ,recent people's life has a huge changes.Now people can eat everything what they want.
Peeople not only has enough food to eat ,but also has lost of delicious food .As the
TV and computer invented,people's life become more and more entertainment.They can watch TV at home,or play computer with their frients.People's life is colorful in today.
In general ,people's life is comfortable and colorful.I believe that our life will have great changes in the future because the development of our country' economy.

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第一段地二句话changes改成change 第三句话,你是想说人们的生活变得越来越快乐become是动词,后面不能跟名词所以改成have more and more happiness 或者become happier and happier第二段第二句话could后面应该加...