UncleChris,I’mgladtohaveheardfromyouagaintheotherday.Bythetimegottheemailthedaybeforeyesterday,Ihadworriedthatifyouhadmetsomeproblemssothatyoucouldn'trespondmyemail.Infact,Ihavebeenthephysicsclassrepresen

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Uncle Chris,
I’m glad to have heard from you again the other day.By the time got the email the day before yesterday,I had worried that if you had met some problems so that you couldn't respond my email.
In fact ,I have been the physics class representative since grade one of high school.But just as I said in the last email,I didn’t do well in the Physics Olympiad last week.I felt down and shameful after that eaxm for days.My physics teacher recognized there was something wrong with me,and had a heart-to-heart talk with me.He never blamed my failure ,and just encouraged me as what you have said in email.He told me the reason why we learnt physics is not to slove these useless and mazy Olympic subject,but to find our own way to explore the world.And he said,to be honest ,we student should never be attached by exam ,though it was the fairest way in nowaday China and I had to try whatever I can to get through it.
I do agree with you and my physics teacher.I think I should forget what I have gained and lost ,and just get ready to face all that difficulty in the future without fear and stress.Everything I do now is to improve myself ,and every step I take is an improvement.
I’m sorry that I can’t reply you as soon as possible ,for there is only one day off for me every week and I have to prepare quite a few exams.You can connect me at 00186-150******** or 00186-023-6825****,the latter is my family number in case that I don’t use moblie someday.
Best wishes,
Gao Yuan

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Uncle Chris,
I’m glad to have heard from you again 【the other day.By the time got the email 】the day before yesterday；(before that) I had 【worried that】 (been worrying) if you had met some problems so that you couldn't respond (to) my email.
In fact,I have been the physics class representative since grade one of high school.But just as I said in the last email,I didn’t do well in the Physics Olympiad last week.I felt down and shameful after that 【eaxm】 (exam) for days.My physics teacher 【recognized】 (had noticed) there was something wrong with me,and had a heart-to-heart talk with me.He 【never】（didn’t） blamed my failure,【and】（instead he）just encouraged me （exactly）as what you have said in (your) email.He told me the reason 【why】we 【learnt】（learn） physics is not to 【slove】（solve） these useless and mazy Olympic 【subject】（subjects）,but to find our own way to explore the world.And he said,to be honest ,we 【student】（students） should never be 【attached】( tied down） by exam ,though it was the fairest way in 【nowaday】China (nowadays) and I had to try whatever I 【can】(could) to get through it.
I do agree with you and my physics teacher.I think I should forget what I have gained and lost ,and just get ready to face all 【that difficulty】(the difficulties) in the future without fear and stress.Everything I do now is to improve myself ,and every step I take is an improvement.
I’m sorry that I can’t reply you as soon as 【possible】(I would like to) ,for there is only one day off for me every week and I have to prepare (for) quite a few exams.You can connect me at or 00186-023-6825****,the latter is my family number in case 【that】 I don’t use 【moblie someday】(mobile sometimes).
Best wishes,
Gao Yuan
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