给位帮我检查下英文简历有没有错啊AresumeofWangHainanPersonalinformationNameWangHainanSexFemaleDateofbirthOct.11,1985PlaceofbirthXuzhouJiangsuTel.E-mailEducationSept.2004----PresentSuzhouUniversityDegreeB.E.inmajor

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给位帮我检查下英文简历有没有错啊
A resume of Wang Hainan
Personal information
Name Wang Hainan
Sex Female
Date of birth Oct.11,1985
Place of birth Xuzhou Jiangsu
Tel.
E-mail
Education
Sept.2004----Present Suzhou University Degree B.E.in major English
Sept.1998----June 2004 Xuzhou No.3 Middle School
Main courses
Comprehensive English Japanese(SFL) Translation Interpretation
English listening English writing English grammar Business English
Import＆export trade Foreign trade correspondence International trade documents
Scholarships and Awards
June 2006 outstanding student cadre of Jiangsu Province
June 2006 the third prize for People’s Scholarship of Suzhou University ( Awarded to 15％students)
June 2006 the first prize for People’s Scholarship of Suzhou University
June 2006 three good student(good in study,attitude and health) of Suzhou University
June 2005 the first prize for People’s Scholarship of Suzhou University (Awarded to 2％students)
June 2005 Zhu Jingwen Scholarship
June 2005 three good student(good in study,attitude and health) of Suzhou University
English skills and computer abilities
TEM–4 CET–6 CET–4
Skilled in Microsoft Office
past Jiangsu Province Computer Rank Examination 1B
Work experiences
July 2005—Aug.2005 Pengcheng Evening Post reporter
我08年毕业 所以没有什么工作经历 只能把重心放在教育学习上了

Answer 1

学生干部 cadre ,个人认为用leader比较好.leader也是筛选简历的关键词之一
三好学生 是不是应该用连字符连起来呢?
另外,从简历的角度讲,一般不用把上过的课给列出来.而是应该更多的写明自己的实践或者项目经验－－总之可以展示自己能力的方面～