帮我批改下英语作文(很短的)8年级TheLifeinthefutureInthefuture,Ithinktherewillcomputersineachhome.Weareabletoknowmoreabouttheworld.IfastudentisillthisstudentcantalkwithteacherontheInternettostudy.An

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帮我批改下英语作文(很短的)8年级
The Life in the future
In the future, I think there will computers in each home. We are able to know more about the world. If a student is ill this student can talk with teacher on the Internet to study. And the scientists will make lots of robots, they will help people do some cooking/cleaning/washing/shopping. If we need see a doctor. The robot will send doctor for us. so, We without going out of one’s house. But, it isn’t really great. because the people possible will be lazy and less talk.
就是这个了,有一些语法错误吧..原文意思请不要改,该语法错误就好啦,谢谢大家了,明天就要检查的,是上的8年级下..第一单元,这里有的词组是不能删掉的
那个,你们两个改的都好好,可是,那个without going out of one's house这个短语是必须有嘚,我该怎么改呀..?还有老师要用"will"引导的一般将来时,求求快点,明天就要交,一会我就嘚下了...

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Life in the future
In the future,I think there will be computers in each home.We will be able to know more about the world.If a student was ill ,this student would talk with his teacher on the Internet to learn.Scientists will also make lots of robots,they will help people do some cooking/cleaning/washing/shopping.If we needed to see a doctor.the robot would send doctors for us,too.and,We can see the dotcor without going out of our house.however,it isn’t really great.because the people possiblely will be lazy and less talktive.
也不知道符合你的要求不,我已经尽力了……有的地方必须用虚拟的,要不语法就不对啊