自己写的英文作文,求大师一改~（改改错句就ok~）Directions:Addisonsaid,“Everymanshouldhaveapurposeinlife.Amanwithoutapurposeliveson,likeacabbageinafield,butheknowsnolife.”Accordingtohim,havingapurpose

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自己写的英文作文,求大师一改~（改改错句就ok~）
Directions:Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on,like a cabbage in a field,but he knows no life.” According to him,having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point,write an essay with no less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.

Answer 1

我（不）下周再见,因为（我）去度假（带）我的父母.
我们总是呆在附近（非常小的城镇）的coast.There为（a）和可爱的沙滩和海水清澈而温暖.
这个镇有大量的（美丽的老）的建筑. （我的）父母喜欢去（画廊）的艺术,但我得到的（无聊）,所以我去了商店.
你可以买到（便宜）的衣服在那里.
我希望大家去我的（最喜欢的餐馆）.
拨回,并告诉我你所有的（令人兴奋的）消息.