英语稿件修改,明天就要用了,如果有不足的地方请指出!Goodevening,everbody!MynameisGuoKaiqiang.I’majuniorstudentoftheelectroicinformationandsciencemajor.I’mgladtostandheretomakeaspeechforyou.Nowlet’sb

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英语稿件修改,明天就要用了,如果有不足的地方请指出!
Good evening,everbody!My name is GuoKaiqiang.I’m a junior student of the electroic information and science major.I’m glad to stand here to make a speech for you.Now let’s begin.
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“M”is for the million things she gave me;
“O”means only that she’s growing old;
“T”is for the tears she shed to save me;
“H”is for her heart of purest gold;
“E”is for her eyes,with the love-light shining
“R”means right,and right she’ll always be.
Put them together,they spell ‘MOTHER’.
A word that means the world to us.
She teaches us how to eat,how to stand,how to walk,how to walk,how to learn.She teaches us everything,but the most important thing is,she teaches us how to love.A mother’s love is like a circle,it has no beginning and ending.She gives everything she could give to us and requires nothing.All wht she wants is the happiness of her child.Once you’ve learned how to love like a mother,you’ve succeed.

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把speech 换成presentation,speech更强调专家做演讲
把Let's begin 删掉 有点不礼貌
how to walk,how to walk,how to learn---how to walk,how to talk and how to learn
but the most important thing is 后面加that
requires nothing.加上for return
建议你加句 Mother's love teaches us how to love and how to be loved.we should know not only how to be loved ,but also how to love others