英语在线修改作文GlobalshortageoffreshwaterWhathascausedtheglobalshortageoffreshwaterandhowcanweslovetheproblem?Whypeoplethinkwidelythatfreshwaterisinexhaustible?Therearesomereason.First,theplentyofrainfall.Sec

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Global shortage of fresh water
What has caused the global shortage of fresh water and how can we slove the problem?
Why people think widely that fresh water is inexhaustible?There are some reason.First,the plenty of rainfall.Second,the numerous wells.Third,the countless rivers falls and springs.All above tend to people think that we have inexhaustible fresh water.But in fact,we are short of fresh water ,because the development of industry and agriculture tend to the population growth year by year.The water pollution is very serious.
Now,we should take measures to solve the problem.For example,we must protect water resources from being polluted,save water or recyle water and convert sea water into drinkable water
请帮我修改下这篇作文。

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first paragraph:how can we solve the problem
second paragraph:why people widely think that fresh water is infinite?there are some reasons.F the plenty of rainfalls.S the infinitely minable wells (其实井和雨不是无尽的,你最好多查查关于水资源的资料),第三个就不要了吧,你用了太多量词了 river fall 是水位,不是水流.All above make people think that we have inexhaustible fresh water.nevertheless,we are short of fresh water,the development of chemical and electrical industry etc.caused severe water pollution.(这里也不知道帮你改什么好,总之别用tend to)
Now,we should take measures on the water pollusion.e.g.用你写的吧