能帮我改改这篇作文吗.我会追分的.谢谢老师differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutfriendship.inmyopinions,friendshipisveryimportantinmylife.because,everybodyneedapersontotalkwiththeirproblemandnobodylikest

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能帮我改改这篇作文吗.我会追分的.谢谢老师
different people have different opinions about friendship.in my opinions,friendship is very important in my life.because,everybody need a person to talk with their problem and nobody likes to stay alone.what's more,we can share something we like to our best friend.I get along with my friends well.and we can talk about many thing we like ,we will go to somewhere together.we always get along very relaxed instead of serious.when each other has problems,we often come up with good ways to solve it.In my eyes,real friends are supposed to in common.then we can understand each other and try our best to help each other.i think Danke is my best friend and she is also my real friend.

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我直接把修改好的作文写在下面

Different people have different opinions about friendship. In my opinion, friendship is very important in my life. Because,everybody needs a person to talk about their problems with. And nobody likes to stay alone. What's more,we can share something we like with our best friend. I get along well with my friends. And we can talk about many things we like, and we will go to somewhere together. We always get along relaxedly but not seriously. When each of us has problems, we often come up with good ways to solve it. In my eyes,real friends are supposed to be in common. Then we can understand each other and try our best to help each other. I think Danke is my best friend and she is also my real friend.

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