请教这个全倒装是否正确notonlyeverywhereappearnaturedisasters,butalsoconstantlyarisevarioussocialproblems.前面那个需要用半倒装句,但是我想全倒装,不知这样写正确否,另外再问一个问题.Sotheclarityof

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请教这个全倒装是否正确
not only everywhere appear nature disasters,but also constantly arise various social problems.
前面那个需要用半倒装句,但是我想全倒装,不知这样写正确否,
另外再问一个问题.
So the clarity of the Internet challenges the openness of the government’s work process,which,as a result,leads the public to losing faith to the officials and even reluctance.In the meantime,our governors made little efforts for long.
我想表示在过去一段时间的那个“同时”,政府没有努力,但是前面是用的一般现在时,不知后面句子用一般过去时正确吗?

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1 not only but also 连接两个单独分句,not only 引导的分句 只能部分倒装,不能全部倒装,but also 引导的句子 保持正常语序
Not only does the sun give us light but also it gives us heat
你这个句子感觉逻辑上也有问题呢
not only do nature disasters appear verywhere,but also various social problems constantly arise everywhere.
如果你一定要用everywhere做主语(这属于中文逻辑) 无话可说
2 so 和 as a result 重复
leads the public to lose faith in the officials and be even reluctant
与此同时 意味着 时态一致的 要么全部用过去式
要么 把 In the meantime 改成 一个表示过去的时间 如 in the past