英文对话改错.我自己瞎拼个自我介绍不知道对不对?有没有错误不通顺的地方请各位英文达人修改下goodmorningmr.howdoyoudo.firstthankforyourcangivemethisopportunityforinterviewihopeicanhaveago

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英文对话改错.
我自己瞎拼个自我介绍
不知道对不对?
有没有错误 不通顺的地方 请各位英文达人修改下
goodmorning mr.
how do you do.
first thank for your can give me this opportunity for interview
i hope i can have a good performance today
now i will introduce myself
my name is XXX
i am XX years old
i am from chang chun
it is a very beautiful city
I will graduate from XX Institute of Physical Education
Through the college life I learned a lot of knowledge
and it gave me a lot of good memories
but i will graduate in june
about my character,
i cannot describe it well,
but i know i am optimistic
i have many friends
i like to chat with my friends talk everything ,
my favorite pastime is surf online. and i like all sports
that is all
thanks

Answer 1

good morning Mr XX.Nice to meet you.Thank you very much for this opportunity.i hope i can give you a good impression.First let me introduce myself.my name is XXXi am XX years old i am from chang chuni...