英语高手进帮我改改这篇日记children'sdayTodayischildren'sday.Theweatherwasfine.So,Iwenttothezoo.Oh!Therewerealotofpeopleinthezoo.Isawmanyanimals,panda,monkey,andtiger.ButIlikepandabest.Beca

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英语高手进帮我改改这篇日记
children's day
Today is children's day .The weather was fine.
So , I went to the zoo . Oh ! There were a lot of people in the zoo.
I saw many animals ,panda , monkey , and tiger .
But I like panda best .Because they are very cute .I also played with them .
What a happy day !
Do you think so?
英语日记children's day有毛病吗?帮忙修改一下,谢谢!

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children's day
Today is children's day .The weather was fine.
So ,I went to the zoo .Oh !There were a lot of people in the zoo.
I saw many animals ,like pandas ,monkeys ,tigers ,and so on.
But I like pandas best .Because they are very cute .I also play with them .
What a happy day !
Do you think so?
注意like后面要接可数名词复数,还有你好厉害哟!可以 play with pandas!