那位大神来帮我写一篇英语作文啊,我感激不尽,悬赏100财富来帮我……在线等啊,120字左右的,原题为21世纪报网站对中学生健康情况调查,发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧.主要原因有：1.大

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那位大神来帮我写一篇英语作文啊,我感激不尽,悬赏100财富来帮我……在线等啊,120字左右的,
原题为
21世纪报网站对中学生健康情况调查,发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧.主要原因有：1.大部分时间伏案写作业,体育锻炼时间不足或应付.2.早餐来不及吃,在校在家吃饭挑食,导致饮食结构不合理.3.心理压力大,不能与家人很好的沟通.
为此,他们发起了题为：“How to keep fit”的征文,分析现状并提出你的个人看法与意见.
这是老师的原题目,不是征文,
以分析现状并提出你的个人看法与意见为主,意见多一点,再分一下段落,不要将我给的三点原因当为重点,好我在加50~100财富,周日了,周一就要用了,

Answer 1

According to research done by the 21st century newspaper on middle school students, many of these students have worrying health conditions.
Many of them prefer to lay on the table while doing their homework, and this can deal a detrimental blow to their eyesight, and posture problems. This is further aggravated by their lack of exercise. I feel that students should set aside some time every few days, to go out and exercise. Also, they should always be conscious of their posture and try to sit upright, to prevent anymore visual and spinal damage.
Another problem would be their nutrition. Given their busy schedules and early school starting times, they often skip breakfast. This, in the long run, can cause serious illnesses, as scientists have branded Breakfasts as the most important meals of the day. Students are also very picky with their food, and tend to eat more junk food and less vegetables. This not only causes an imbalance in nutrition, but also a lack of important vitamins and minerals needed to aid their growth in puberty. This leads to obesity in many cases, and will also damage their delicate body systems.
对不起,写到这里已经192 字了,只有两点,还要在跟我说吧!^_^