一篇PETS3图表作文,欢迎修改.下面是本人写的PETS3第10课的图表作文,欢迎修改,一味奉承不会得分.ThisgraphshowsthatChina’stourismrankingintheworld.China’sforeignexchangeearningsareonlytheforty-firstin

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一篇PETS3图表作文,欢迎修改.
下面是本人写的PETS3第10课的图表作文,欢迎修改,一味奉承不会得分.
This graph shows that China’s tourism ranking in the world.China’s foreign exchange earnings are only the forty-first in the world in 1978,but the eighth in 1997.China’s number of visitors is only the fifty-first in the world,but the sixth in 1997.We can see that China’s tourism develop rapidly.
What is the reason for this?First of all,there are a lot of good places to visit in China,such as:the Great Wall,the Buddha Palace,the jungle in Yunnan and so on.More importantly,China is developing quickly these years.Most important of all,China is more and more important in the world,lots of visitors come to China.
From the above discussions,we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.More and more visitors will come to China.China will earn more and more money on foreign exchange.

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We can see that China’s tourism developed rapidly.More important,From the discussions abovewe have enough reasonsPS,少用没more and more,和important,我看你的文章条理清晰,就是用词不够新....