雅思作文!Whenwelearnalanguage,weshouldalsolearntheculturesandlifestylesofthiscountry.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplebesideusbegintolearnforeignlanguage,likeEnglish,Japanese,andChinese,f

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When we learn a language,we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,more and more people beside us begin to learn foreign language,like English,Japanese,and Chinese,for some reasons,including finding a good job and cultivating their own interest.Some people believe that they should learn about the countries,cultures and lifestyles when they are learning these languages.
This argument may be true.They can know what they are really learning,in other words,they can know the exact meaning of these words.For example,"fish and chips" is a kind of food that is pretty popular in Britain but is not so common be seen in China.They can learn these words soon after learning the lifestyle of UK.Also,they can use these languages better.That is to say,they can know when and how to use them.Taking the "thank you" for example,people know that these words usually be used when someone help them if they know the culture.
Nevertheless,there are various aspects against these arguments,It will turn out to be a waste of time for them to do as that.As we all know,learning another country is really a tough work even to these native people,letting alone these students.Even if they can learn the other country well,it does not mean that they can learn the language well,just because of that there are too much difference between learning a foreign language and country.
In conclusion,people should learn some but not so much about the country about the country while they are learning a foreign language if they had some spare time.Only in that way can students study it well and find a good job.

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首先,我觉得这篇文章从结构上来说很规范,大体布局,还有字数分配都不错.再从细节方面考虑,首先第一段,当你说完别人的意见的时候,应该加一个自己的观点,例如本文的话,可以说I think either side has it’s own advanta...