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英语短文帮我查看一下下面短文是否有错误,找出一处5分,以此类推,MyFamilyHello!Mynameis###.I'mthirteenyearsold.I'mastudent.IlikereadingbooksandwatchingTV.Iwanttobeateacher.I'mgoodatMathsandArt.Myfath
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帮我查看一下下面短文是否有错误,找出一处5分,以此类推,
My Family
Hello!My name is # # #.I'm thirteen years old.I'm a student.I like reading books and watching TV.I want to be a teacher.I'm good at Maths and Art.
My father is thirty-seven years old.He likes watching TV,too.We often watch TV together after lunch.And he likes playing football.
My mother is thirty-six.She is a housewife.She isn't very tall.She has two small eyes and a small mouth.She likes cooking and growing flowers.She often cooks nice food.On Sundays,we often go shopping and go swimming.She swims better than me .But I swim faster than her.
My grandmother is sixty years old.She likes rading newspapers .She often reads newspapers .And she likes watering the flowers.She waters flowers every day.There are many beautiful flowers in my house.Sometimes,there are some butterflies in my house.It's very nice.I like them very much.
My grandfather is sixty-two years old,but he looks very young.His hair is very short.He likes cooking,too.He cooks better than my mother.And he likes making kites.He often makes nice kites for me.
I have a happy family.
帮我查看一下下面短文是否有错误,找出一处5分,以此类推,
My Family
Hello!My name is # # #.I'm thirteen years old.I'm a student.I like reading books and watching TV.I want to be a teacher.I'm good at Maths and Art.
My father is thirty-seven years old.He likes watching TV,too.We often watch TV together after lunch.And he likes playing football.
My mother is thirty-six.She is a housewife.She isn't very tall.She has two small eyes and a small mouth.She likes cooking and growing flowers.She often cooks nice food.On Sundays,we often go shopping and go swimming.She swims better than me .But I swim faster than her.
My grandmother is sixty years old.She likes rading newspapers .She often reads newspapers .And she likes watering the flowers.She waters flowers every day.There are many beautiful flowers in my house.Sometimes,there are some butterflies in my house.It's very nice.I like them very much.
My grandfather is sixty-two years old,but he looks very young.His hair is very short.He likes cooking,too.He cooks better than my mother.And he likes making kites.He often makes nice kites for me.
I have a happy family.
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基本没什么错误.
如果你是初中生,我觉得你写的还不错了,文句通顺,语法没毛病,拼写错误也不多.
如果你是高中生的话,这样的作文就有点太平庸了,没什么出彩的地方,能得 80%,但是 肯定得不到 90%.
如果你是初中生,我觉得你写的还不错了,文句通顺,语法没毛病,拼写错误也不多.
如果你是高中生的话,这样的作文就有点太平庸了,没什么出彩的地方,能得 80%,但是 肯定得不到 90%.
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