请英语高手帮忙看下是否不标准Mynameis×××,I'mfrom××andI'mverykind.I'dliketomakefriendswitheveryonebutageis24through35.Idon'tlikethepeoplewhowouldliketoairhisknowledgeandhisabilityalsoIhatethe

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请英语高手帮忙看下是否不标准
My name is ×××,I'm from ×× and I'm very kind .I'd like to make friends with everyone but age is 24 through 35 .I don't
like the people who would like to air his knowledge and his ability also I
hate the people who always speak with filthy remarks.I wish the man romantic
gentle steady-going not a fast talker and having great ability.I don't l
ike the man who always ask some personal's problem of me .I think it's i
ll-mannered to ask personal questions also if u want to know sth about m
e u must introduce yourself first.If you just want to have fun,please show yourself some respect!

Answer 1

1.第一行的but改成whose,第二行的throuth改成to,第三行的would删去,air改成boast,also放到I后面,而且ability后面加逗号 speak with filthy remarks改成speak filthily.
2.I wish the man 改为I hope I life partner can be a man who is
3.having great ability这个有什么问题
4 I don't like the man 省去the
5.who always ask some personal's problem of me改为who always ask me some personal matter(personal就是个人的的意思,已经有的在里面,所以不用加的,即's)
6.I think it's ill-mannered to ask personal questions also if u want to know sth about me u must introduce yourself first改为I think it is ill-mannered to ask personal matters ,if you want to know something about me,you must introduce youself first
7.If you just want to have fun,please show yourself some respect!改为If you just want to have fun,please stay away from me!