大家帮我看看这作文的语法有什么问题帮我改出来好不?Mynameis**.I'magirl,15yearsold.BorninBeijing.TherearesomanyreasonswhyIchoosetostudyaboardinNewZealand,theadvantagesIcantakeareincredible.Thegreates

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大家帮我看看这作文的语法有什么问题 帮我改出来好不?
My name is **.I'm a girl,15 years old.Born in Beijing.There are so many reasons why I choose to study aboard in New Zealand,the advantages I can take are incredible.
The greatest advantage is the ability to be more proficient in spoken English.And Study abroad can exercise our capacity for independent living.The most important thing is to study abroad students can receive advanced education abroad.
Environment of living and learning is also a big advantage.New Zealand was named "The most suitable country for living" by U.N.Student can study in a safe and comfortable environment effectively.
That's the reason why i wana study aboard in New Zealand.

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My name is **.I'm a girl,15 years old,【born】 in Beijing.There are so many reasons why I choose to study aboard in New Zealand.The advantages I can take are incredible.
The greatest advantage is the ability to be more proficient in spoken English.And 【studying】 abroad can 【provide us capacity of living independently 】.The most important thing is【that】 【studying】 abroad students can receive advanced education abroad.
Environment of living and learning is also a big advantage.New Zealand 【is called】 "The most suitable country for living" by U.N.Student can study in a safe and comfortable environment 【efficiently 】.
【Such are the reasons】 why i wana study aboard in New Zealand.