请帮帮忙做一个proofwriting~人家说很简单、可我就是不会做T-T就是每一排找一个错的地方~parklokwasexciting.heandhisfamilyweregoingtothailandonapackethoilday.theypackedtwoluggagesandsetofffortheai

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请帮帮忙做一个proof writing~【人家说很简单、可我就是不会做T-T】
就是每一排找一个错的地方~
park lok was exciting.he and his family were
going to thailand on a packet hoilday.they
packed two luggages and set off for the
airport.there they met the other member of their
group,and their leader,joe,friendli young man.
There was one other teenager boy ,soit looked
as if park lok would be a friend.he enjoyed
the flying,as he had never flown before.
it was really thrilling to take up,and he passed
the time easily looking out off the window,
eating and playing his gameboy.it took
about two and half hours to get to bangkok
they had to have their passports be atamped,
and then they travelled to their hotel a coach .bangkok
has a lot of traffics jams so it took a long
time to get to their hotel .they lived there
for two nights,and park lok was impressed to
the royal palace and the colour temples.

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Park Lok was very exciting.He and his family were going to thailand on a package hoilday.They packed two luggage [luggage 此字是已经是众数,没有s尾] and set off for the airport.They met the other member of their group at the airport and their leader,joe,a friendly young man.There was another teenager boy ,soit looked 唔明你写甚麼) as if park lok would be a friend.He enjoyed the flying as he had never flown before.It was really thrilling to take up,and time past easily when looking out off the window,eating and playing his gameboy.It took about two and half hours to get to Bangkok .They had to have their passports be stamped,and then they travelled to their hotel by coach .Bangkok has a lot of traffic jam so it took a long time to get to their hotel.They lived there for two nights,and park lok was impressed to the royal palace and the colour temples.