这个句子中than是否可以这么用?我想表达Theefficiencywillbemuchhigherinregularclassesthaninonlineclasses.但regularclasses前句中刚出现,我想去掉以避免重复.那么可以写成Theefficiencywillbemuchhigherth

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这个句子中than是否可以这么用?
我想表达The efficiency will be much higher in regular classes than in online classes.
但regular classes前句中刚出现,我想去掉以避免重复.那么可以写成The efficiency will be much higher than in online classes.in去掉还是不去掉呢?如果不行,最简能写到什么样子?

Answer 1

这个句子有几个简洁和雅致的表达方式：
Regular classes will be much more efficient than online ones.
Regular classes will have much greater efficiency than online ones.
The efficiency of regular classes are much greater than that of online ones.
Regular,as opposed to online classes,will have much greater efficiency.
我觉得第 4 句 最佳.
3个建议：
1.考虑用 classroom classes 替代 regular classes
2.加个单词 generally 使句意比较委婉,比如：
Regular classes will generally have much greater efficiency than online ones.
3.我觉得 greater efficiency 比 higher efficiency 贴切
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