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语法纠错急,万分感谢 !duty帮帮忙
Good morning everyone, I’m on duty today. It is November now. A month later, there will be a new film on----the Hobbit
The Hobbit explains some important events which happened about 60 years before the period of the Lord of the Ring. Speaking about •The Lord of the Rings is the most famous fantasy epic ,which is written by J.R.R.Tolken.It tells a story happened in a mythological world——the Middle Earth. There were Elves,human-beings,wizards,Dwarfs,Hobbits as well as some evil living things which listened to the Dark Lord,Sauron. The Hobbit tells a journey of a Hobbit, together with 13 dwarfs and a wizard. They go treasure hunting, and fight for justice and honor bravely. It is a story about couragement, friendship and temptation.
This is the hero of the film: Bilbo Baggins.
This is the wizard: Gandalf.
The film is directed by Peter Jackson. There is a little monster called Gullom.It is acted by Andy Smiths and they use CG technology to make true people into a monster.
The whole film is in 48 ====3D, which is the most -------- 3D technology in the world. So the scenes are gorgeous.
Besides some new faces, there will be some old characters from the Lord of the Rings.
The film is divided into 2
parts. They will be shown in 2012, 2014. The first part is said to be shown in 2013 in China. Billions of fans----including me ----are looking forward to it!
That’s all. Thanks for listening!

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我帮你全文都改一下,改为是这样的：Good morning everyone!I would like to talk something about a film in the following.It is November now.A month later,there will be a new film come out,which is called the Hobbit.
The Hobbit tells some important events which happened about 60 years ago,which happend before the period of the Lord of the Ring.The Lord of the Rings is the most famous fantasy epic ,which is written by J.R.R.Tolken.It tells a story happened in a mythological world——the Middle Earth.There were Elves,human-beings,wizards,Dwarfs,Hobbits as well as some evil living things which listened to the Dark Lord,Sauron.The Hobbit tells a journey of a Hobbit,together with 13 dwarfs and a wizard.They go treasure hunting,and fight for justice and honor bravely.It is a story about couragement,friendship and temptation.
The hero of the film is called Bilbo Baggins.
And the wizard of this movie is Gandalf.
The film is directed by Peter Jackson.There is a little monster called Gullom.It is played by Andy Smiths and they use CG technology to make true people looks more like a monster.
The whole film is in 48 ====3D,which is the toppest3D technology in the world.So the scenes seem quite gorgeous.
Besides some new faces,there will be some old characters from the Lord of the Rings.
The film is divided into 2 parts.And these two parts will be shown soon.The first part is said to be shown in 2013 in China.Billions of fans including me,are all looking forward to it!
Thank you very much!