谁能帮帮手在以下的英文文章中找出八个错处.在今晚十点半前能回答就行了,summarisingthestory,Marysaidthatthefilmisabouttwopeoplewhoaccidentallymetoneday.RitawasridingherbicyclewhenDannybumpedher.Atf

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谁能帮帮手在以下的英文文章中找出八个错处.在今晚十点半前能回答就行了,
summarising the story,Mary said that the film is about two people who accidentally
met one day .Rita was riding her bicycle when Danny bumped her.At first,they didn't like eachother but Mary revealed that they later falling in love.
He said that both the leading acor and leading actress gives a very good perfomance and she said that he liked the ending very much.However,he did not want to tell you what happened in the end.Mary said that the film was both funny and sad.He said that it a film for everyone and that there was some good songs in it.
acor写错了.应该是actor(女主角)

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summarising(->To summarize) the story,Mary said that the film is(->was) about two people who accidentally met one day.Rita was riding her bicycle when Danny bumped her.At first,they didn't like each other but Mary revealed that they later falling(->fell) in love.He(->She) said that both the leading actor and leading actress gives(->gave) a very good performance and she said that he(->she) liked the ending very much.However,he(->she) did not want to tell you what happened in the end.Mary said that the film was both funny and sad.He(->She) said that it (加上was) a film for everyone and that there was (were) some good songs in it.
这么多he\she的错用,有些是你打错了吧?弄得我第一遍完全没明白是什么意思.