英语稿看看有没有错语法、单词、标点请统统指出WiththecommunistpartyofChina,ChinahadhopeThecommunistpartyofChina's90yearsofjourneyisahistoryofstruggle.AsacommonChinese,everyoneknowsthatourpartywasbor

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With the communist party of China,China had hope
The communist party of China's 90 years of journey is a history of struggle.As a common Chinese,everyone knows that our party was born during the war years.At the beginning,our party regarded saving nation and the people as her own responsibility.Everyone knows it is the Communist Party that truly carried up the hands of the general.We all know it was the Communist part that led us to today's socialism,which made us have happy and democratic life.Talking of the struggle of the party,we can say,from that moment onwards,our party had its own armed forces.
This year the party is 90 years old.As successor of the motherland young vigorous people.We showed keep up with the time.We showed unite together to make our party,country better and stronger.

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Under the leadership of the communist party of China,China has hope.
The 90 years' journey of China's communist party has witnessed a long history of struggle.As an ordinary Chinese,everyone knows that our party was born in the war time.All along the journey,our party regarded saving the nation and the people as her responsibility.Everyone knows that it is the Communist Party that truly carried up the hands of the general.(这句话我不明白你想说什么,举起大众的手?是让大家投降吗?） We all know it is the Communist part that has led us to today's socialism,which has provided us with happy and democratic life.As far as the struggle of the party is concerned,we can say,since then（这里无论怎么说,缺乏时间对比,以那个点作为坐标,自从那一刻开始呀?） ,our party started to have its own armed forces.
This year marks the party's 90th birthday.As a successor of the motherland,we,young vigorous people should keep up with the time and unit each other to make our party,our nation better and stronger.