英语翻译WhenIwasachild,Iwasfascinatedbythemelodyofpianoonthescreen.Atthattime,Idreamedofbeingapianistandhavingmyownpiano.Attheageoffive,myfatherboughtmeabeautifulpianoasmybirthdaypresentwiththemoneythey

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英语翻译
When I was a child,I was fascinated by the melody of piano on the screen.At that time,I dreamed of being a pianist and having my own piano.
At the age of five,my father bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money they had saved for a long time.At the same time,my father found a piano teacher for me and every day I would practise it again and again as my father demanded.Before long,my interest in piano was transferred to other things.I began to escape the practice as much as I could.My father found out my impatience.He encouraged me and was stricter with me than ever before.With his help,
I underwent the hardest time and devoted myself to the piano.
Now,in my spare time after a long time of study and hard work,I always play the piano and enjoy the beautiful music.

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my father bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money they had saved for a long time.------with改为using,with虽然用的意思 但是不能这么用语法倒不是问题 感觉你翻译的很别扭 不地道 ...