IconfirmedthatJhadcontactedMr.Wanbefore,andtheywouldconfirmthedatelater.请英文高手帮忙看看这句话有什么问题,中文是想表达：我和J确认过了,J之前已经联系过万先生,他们会在稍候确认（会议）的

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I confirmed that J had contacted Mr.Wan before,and they would confirm the date later.
请英文高手帮忙看看这句话有什么问题,中文是想表达：我和J确认过了,J之前已经联系过万先生,他们会在稍候确认（会议）的时间.

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I have confirmed from J that he had contected MR WAN in advance and they will confirm the date later soon.
你这里confirm后面没有直接的对象,而是跟了一个句子,就没有表明i和谁确认过了,只是说了一个确认的事.大的来说就这一个毛病,对象不明确.上面那个改译过的可以做参考,只是我觉得后面那个confirm可以换个别的词更好,一时想不起来