这句语法有没有问题Andthemainreasonformetochoosethisjobisforitcouldletmehelpmyfamilykeephealthy,whichisthemostimportantthingforme.还有这个which后边跟is和wouldbe有什么区别没有?

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这句语法有没有问题
And the main reason for me to choose this job is for it could let me help my family keep healthy,which is the most important thing for me.还有这个which 后边跟 is 和 would be 有什么区别没有?

Answer 1

1.…this job is for 中的for 应改成that,用于引导其后的定语从句.
2.let me help my family keep 应改成help me keep my family healthy.
另外,中文的“选择这份工作”一般很少用choose,而是用take.