英语达人们,谁能帮助我把这段英文里的语法,时态,动词和复合句使用错误修改过来,AmongHemingway’swritings,thenovelForWhomtheBellTollsoccupiesanimportantplace.Havengivingupthenihilismheoneembracedinhi

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英语达人们,谁能帮助我把这段英文里的语法,时态,动词和复合句使用错误修改过来,
Among Hemingway’s writings,the novel For Whom the Bell Tolls occupies an important place.Haven giving up the nihilism he one embraced in his early years,Hemingway set up the new confidence both in himself and society.He actively went into the society practice,in which he found the real material for his novel.He created a new form of narration with his space art different from his former writing style.In his writing,he used the space art skill,he properly handled the relations among the natural space,the realistic space and the psychological one.With the natural space as the basis,he turned it into a realistic one through magnifying the subject matter,and opened his psychological space through an extension to the inner world of the characters.With his calm viewpoint and smooth writing style,Hemingway revealed the temporary perplexion,blankness,melancholy,grief,desperation and indignation in the depths of the protagonist’s heart,accordingly embodied the value of the character as well as the significance of the life,and simultaneously,Hemingway also fully showed us his personal remarkable talent of art.This whole story in novel was happen in only three days,the time was very short; the activity’s space was very narrow,expect Andre went to headquarters send message,the activity was happen on the mountian; the important character just less,four direct person and one villain person.But Hemingway used the special space art skill make the character’s relationship was close and became the pattern “three point on the line to one point”,we can know the character’s feature and their relationship,the pattern of character was clear,the fullness of novel and the complex of character reached a new height.In For Whom the Bell Tolls,Hemingway always put the character that in subject of space into social life’s horizontal and history’s vertical,through describe the life’s surface and deep and usually plus his imagine.He break character’s natural timeline and space limit,put character’s history,reality and future together,made complex contradiction and countless relationship between characters become a net,used time express the develop of story,used character formed contradictionIn.For Whom the Bell Tolls,the space of created character was very narrow,but because of Hemingway was good at put character into change,made the relationship of characters and the contradiction were complex,then break limit of space.For example,the contradiction of Robert Jordan and Pablo was the basis contradiction run through the whole story,the process of transformation was expand around the contradiction that before and after destroyed the iron bridge,the developing of story was expand around some time point,and formed the curve that “ harmonious—intense—harmonious—intense”

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已帮你去掉所有语法错误.由于没有中文原文,原文的后半部分看不大懂.
这么长,奖赏分应大大提高才是.
Among Hemingway’s writings,the novel For Whom the Bell Tolls occupies an important place.Haven giving up the nihilism he one embraced in his early years,Hemingway built up new confidence both in himself and society.He actively delved into practices in society,in which he found the real material for his novel.He created a new form of narration with his space art,which was different from his former writing style.In his new writing,he used the space art skill and properly handled the relations among the natural space,realistic and psychological spaces.With the natural space as the basis,he turned it into a realistic one through magnifying the subject matter,and opened his psychological space through an extension to the inner world of the characters.With his calm viewpoint and smooth writing style,Hemingway revealed the temporary perplexion,blankness,melancholy,grief,desperation and indignation in the depths of the protagonist’s heart,accordingly embodied the value of the character as well as the significance of life,and simultaneously fully demonstrated to us his remarkable talent of art.In the novel,the whole story happened in a short span of only three days,the time; the activities’ space was very narrow--,the activities took place on the mountain except when expect Andre went to the headquarters to send a message; there were few important characters,just four direct (upright?,or simple good guys) persons and one villain.But Hemingway used the special space art skill to make the characters relationship close and form the pattern of “three points in a line”.We can tell the characters’ features and their relationship,the clear pattern of character,the fullness of the novel and the complex of characters at a new height.In For Whom the Bell Tolls,Hemingway always put the characters in question into social life’s horizontal and history’s vertical,through describing life’s surface and depth,usually with additional touches from his imagination.He broke the characters’ natural timeline and space limit,put their history,reality and future together,formed complex contradiction and countless relationship between characters into a net,used time to express the development of the story and used characters to form contradiction.In For Whom the Bell Tolls,the space of the created characters was very narrow,but because Hemingway was good at putting characters into change,making the relationship of characters and the contradiction more complex before breaking the limits of space.For example,the contradiction of Robert Jordan and Pablo was the basis contradiction that runs through the whole story,the process of transformation was expanded around the contradiction that before and after destroyed the iron bridge,the developing of the story was expanded around some time point,and formed the “harmony—intensity—harmony—intensity” cycle.