我有一篇英语作文,不知道够不够1分钟演讲,而且有蛮多语法错误,如果不够1分钟,请帮忙添几句话.然后语法错误帮忙修改一下,It’smypleasuretointroducemyselftoyouhere.Iamverypleasedtobeheretoint

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我有一篇英语作文,不知道够不够1分钟演讲,而且有蛮多语法错误,
如果不够1分钟,请帮忙添几句话.然后语法错误帮忙修改一下,
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you here.I am very pleased to be here to introduce myself.I was a fanciful girl.I have many wonderful dreams.Sometimes,I would like to travel around the world sat on the clouds; Sometimes,I want to become witches around to steal the spell of black cat; Sometimes,I want to have the same speed like the vampire.
But I have a very realistic dream.I want to be invigorating,like the pianist.
Studied piano since I was little.Hope that one day.I can have a concert held in Provence.Hope that one day.I could have one I can have one of their own piano.
But my parents would always say.Do not forget about irrelevant things.Learning is most important.
I hope my parents can give me much more free space.They should allow me to plan the time by myself.It can make me be mature this is my biggest wish.

Answer 1

1.第一句跟第二句的意思是一样的,可以省略其中一个.2.通常演讲前面可以加个“Good morning / afternoon,everyone.等开场白,演讲结束加个结束语,如That's all.Thank you.3.根据你要表达的大概意思,我帮你修改一下语法...