帮忙修改下介绍地图的英语作文5分钟的英语介绍,我打算介绍地图.下面是自己写的,很垃圾.大家给修改下,看看有没有语法错误,时态,单复数,介词等.增加些关联词使文章紧凑,删掉罗嗦的成分.

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帮忙修改下介绍地图的英语作文
5分钟的英语介绍,我打算介绍地图.下面是自己写的,很垃圾.大家给修改下,看看有没有语法错误,时态,单复数,介词等.增加些关联词使文章紧凑,删掉罗嗦的成分.也可以适当增加内容使文章更充分（觉得写的头重脚轻）,呵呵
Now,I will talk about a map .I am come from BaoDing.Because there aren’t have train between BaoDing and Tianjin,so I have to take bus to our school.If I want reached Tianjian I should taking the Jin-Bao high-speed,and under road thengo straight ahead ChenChang street.Take along with ChenChang street about 8KM turn left.Taking GuangRong road and I will find our school on my right.
The place next to our school is XiGu park and DingZiGu bus station.Sometimes,I go to BinJiang street to go shopping.I often go to there by subway,our school is just 500 meters away from the HongHuLi subway station and lexve from the exit YingKouDao station,If you want buy some Mahua for your parents you can get off in NanLou station.Last week I take NO.855 bus in DingZiGu bus station and get off at the BaLiTai station,And I find the TianJin and NanKai university.
TianJin was so big,I just gone to seldom place.
That’s all,thank you!
看好了是修改不是翻译！

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我大概帮你组织了一下语言然后比较简单的改了改,你看看,有问题可以给我留言.
Now,I would like to talk about a Map .I am from BaoDing.When I go to school in Tianjin,I have to take bus because there is no train between these two cities .To get Tianjin,I should take the Jin-Bao high-speed bus ,and get off the bus at ChenChang street,walk along ChenChang street about 8KM and turn left,then go ahead on GuangRong road and I will find the school on right.
The place next to our school is XiGu park and DingZiGu bus station.Sometimes,I go to BinJiang street for shopping .I often go to there by subway,because the HongHuLi subway station is just 500 meter away form our school .I exit from YingKouDao station later.
If you want buy some fried twist (麻花吧,可以说 bread twist 或者 fried twist) for your parents you can get off the subway at NanLou station.
Last week I took（这里应该用过去式,因为是last week） NO.855 bus at DingZiGu bus station and got off at the BaLiTai station,And I noticed （这里用notice比较好）the TianJin and NanKai university are right there.
Tianjing is so big that I just have been to few places (few places 在这里指的是没几个地方) And I wish I can travel all around Tianjin.
That’s all,thank you!