麻烦大家看一下这篇4级作文能得多少分?OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife1.宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况2.一个和谐的宿舍生活的必要性3.如何创造和谐的宿舍生活OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLifeUsually,there

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麻烦大家看一下这篇4级作文能得多少分?
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
1.宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况
2.一个和谐的宿舍生活的必要性
3.如何创造和谐的宿舍生活
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Usually,there are many little problems in our dormitory lives.For example,one people likes sleeping until it is necessary to wake up,and another likes get up at the same time everyday;One loves rock music and always trun on his radio loudly,and another prefer to studying quietly in dormitory;and so on...When these happen ,there often be something unharmonious occure.
As everyone knows,a harmonious dormitory life is importemt.Firstly,a harmonious life in dormitory is the basis of your good study.Secondly,no matter if you want,you must live with them during the period of you studing in university.Thirdly,you can learn a lot while you are getting on well with somebody whom you did not like before.Thus It is also necessary to live with other people in harmony.
How does a dormitory life to be harmonious?First of all,to control your emotion.Do not be easily angry because a small problem.Second,chat with other people as much as you can.Inmy opinion,if you had did well in these two points,you would find that a harmonious dormitary life is a piece of cake.

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Usually,there are many little problems in our dormitory lives（life）.For example,one people likes sleeping until it is necessary to wake up,and another likes（prefer to） get up at the same time everyday;One loves rock music and always trun（turn） on his radio loudly,and another prefer to studying（study） quietly in dormitory;and so on...When these happen ,there often be(There's often) something unharmonious occure(ing).
As everyone knows,a harmonious dormitory life is importem(n)t.Firstly,a harmonious life in dormitory is the basis of your good study.Secondly,no matter if you want（whether you want or not）,you must live with them during the period of you studing in university(整句不通吧).Thirdly,you can learn a lot while you are getting on well(不懂.) with somebody whom you did not like before.Thus It（it） is also necessary to live with other people in harmony.
How does（can） a dormitory life to be harmonious?First of all,to control your emotion.Do not be easily（前后换一下） angry because （of） a small problem（罗嗦）.Second,chat with other people as much as you can.In my opinion,if you had did（done） well in these two points,you would find that a harmonious dormitary life is a piece of cake.
无聊.就改了一下.四级作文多少满分阿?
及格吧.这篇.