一道高中英语改错题Ifyoulookinsomepublicplaces,youwillseethatmostsmokersareyoungpeople,stillmiddleschoolstudents.ItissaidthatinChinathenumberofpeeplewhosmokeisabout45percentsofthepopulation.whydosuchmanype

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一道高中英语改错题
If you look in some public places,you will see that most smokers
are young people,still middle school students.It is said that in
China the number of peeple who smoke is about 45 percents of the population.why
do such many peoplek smoke?Some think that smoking is a pleasure.
In fact,smoking is a bad habit.It does great harmful to people's
health.Studies of smoking shows that many kinds of diseases are
related to smoking.Smoking for itself is a waste.It costs one
smokers.Today,more and more people all over the world had
begun to give up smoke.If you are not a smoker,don't start.
最好标清那里错了（比如用大写）

Answer 1

1.in→at
2.still→even
3.percents→percent
4.such→so
5.harmful→harm
6.shows→show
7.for去掉
8.smokers→smoker；had→have
9.smoke→smoking
楼主是不是打错了,第二行和第八行应该少打了点什么；
还有应该总共十行啊,怎么只有九行了?