帮我改一下英语自我介绍.（仅语法语序错误）Helloeverybody.i'mhonouredtobehere.therehaveastagetoshowmycourage.ok,mabyyouwanttoknowmeandfirtmynameis×××,i'mfrom×××,asyoucanseei'magirlaboutmyagei

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帮我改一下英语自我介绍.（仅语法语序错误）
Hello everybody.i'm honoured to be here.there have a stage to show my courage.ok,maby you want to know me and firt my name is ×××,i'm from ×××,as you can see i'm a girl about my age it's a secret.but today i can tell you it.i;m fourteen years old.since i was borned my mother had told me some interesting stories.so i still have this hobby today.the books can make me wisdom and i also like playing sports.every moring i run with my parents.now you mabe think there are three people in my family that's wrong.it's four i have a sister she was lazy she don't want to get up early.and i think i'm smart because my favorite subject are math and physics of cours and english.in future i want to find a boyfirend from australia that's reallycool i here about that foreigners are very firendly aren't they?all about me i can't tell you here because it not say for a while.finally,i also want to say it's happy for me to join this competation.i think we can be good firends ok that's all thank you.

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Hello everybody.I'm honoured to be here.this is a stage to show my courage.Ok,maby you want to know me and firt my name is ×××and I'm from ×××.As you can see ,I'm a girl,of fourteen.My mother has told me some interesting stories since I was born,so i still have this hobby today.Books make me wise .Besides,I also like sports.Every moring I run with my parents.Now you maybe think there are three people in my family.You are wrong.There are four!I have a sister who is lazy and doesn't want to get up early in the morning.I think i'm smart because my favorite subject are math,physics and English.In future i want to find a boyfirend from Australia,which will be reallycool,for I hear that foreigners are very firendly aren't they?I can't tell you all about me here because time is not enough.Finally,I also want to say I am happy to join in this competation.I think we can be good firends.That's all.Thank you.
我是高中英语老师,你的短文确实有很多错误.我这里给你认真修改了.楼上的我也看了,依然有语法错误.比如 i'm honoured to be here where has a stage to show my courage.和There has a stage to show my courage.就绝对是错句子.