哪位英语达人能帮我看看这几句英语回答有木有错误?或者有木有更地道的表达方法?1.Describeatraditionaldishinyourcountry.Whataretheingredients?A:OneofthemostfamousdishesinmycountryisBuddhaskippingwall

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哪位英语达人能帮我看看这几句英语回答有木有错误?或者有木有更地道的表达方法?
1.Describe a traditional dish in your country.What are the ingredients?
A:One of the most famous dishes in my country is Buddha skipping wall.Some famous person have taste it before,such as president Reagan、Queen Elizabeth .Beyond all doubt,it's very tasty,and it's tasty can give the credit to the ingredients.Sea slug、abalone、chicken、bamboo shoot and many other raw materials can be included.Eighteen kinds of raw materials are needed.
2.Describe your dorm.Is it on campus or off campus?How many roommates you have?And how your roommates get along with each other?
A:I live on campus.Our dorm is a quadruple room with everyone's bed on top and the desk underneath.I have three roommates .We respect each other,always communicate with my roommates actively .（如果行的话这里能帮我加一点吗?拜谢!）

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1.Describe a traditional dish in your country.What are the ingredients?
A:One of the most famous dishes in my country is Buddha skipping wall.Some famous persons,such as president Reagan and Queen Elizabeth have tasted it before.Beyond all doubt,it's very tasty,and its taste may give the credit to the ingredients.Sea slug,abalone,chicken,bamboo shoot and many other raw materials can be included.Eighteen kinds of raw materials are needed.
2.Describe your dorm.Is it on campus or off campus?How many roommates you have?And how your roommates get along with each other?
A:I live on campus.Our dorm is a quadruple room with everyone's beds on top and desks underneath.I have three roommates.We respect each others,and I always communicate with my roommates actively.再加点：
Other than communication,frequent activities that we participate together surely tighten up our relationship even more.That's why I like on-campus life the most.