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有谁帮我看看有无语法错误
My neighbor is a very kindly old man.He makes a living by sell newspaper.He has to look after child.He never takes part in various activities,but he get on well with anyone else.He often says there is no barrier between neighbors.

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My neighbor is a very （kind） old man.He makes a living by （selling） newspaper. He has to look after （a） child. He never takes part in various activities,but he gets on well with （everyone）（去掉else）.He often says there is no （barriers） （among） neighbors.
between 用于两方之间,如果要说他与邻居之间,应该是between he and his neighbours,如果要说邻里之间,用among,表示多方之间