Cellphone作文第三段（3）老师,这是第三段Ithinkthecellphoneissogoodthatmakesourlifemoreconfortableandconvenient.Ibelievethatabrightfutureisawaitingusifwemakeagooduseofcellphone.完结篇,请老师

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Cell phone 作文第三段（3） 老师,这是第三段
I think the cell phone is so good that makes our life more confortable and convenient . I believe that a bright future is a waiting us if we make a good use of cell phone.
完结篇,请老师批改,谢谢老师

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修改： I think the cell phone is so good that it makes our life more comfortable and convenient. I believe there is a bright future waiting for it if we make good use of it.解释：1. so...that...中的t...