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英语作文修改
是图表作文,图表就不能发出来了,自己觉得语句不是很通顺
希望大侠们能够指出文章中的各种问题,
有三篇 确实有点多 不过悬赏确实倾我所有 诚信求教
（一）
Total energy use in China,india and the U.S
This graph shows the total energy use in China,India and the U.S since 1970.
United States used most energy use in the three counties,being more than the combined of China and India.However,energy use in the U.S keep rise and fall before 1985.It didn't high than 70 exajoules,and didn't lower than 60 exajoules.As far as its international relationship was concerned,United states were unfriendly with some countries.It has Cold War with Russian and something like that.The unsteady international condition let the U.S energy use unsteady.However,united states become the most powerful country in the world since 1985,its energy use keep steady increase.
Compared with the U.S,China and India have a large population.Although the usage was keeping increase from 1970 to 1991,its amount has a big distance with United States.China did not growth quickly until 1975,for the new economic program,As a result,the usage were increased to 30 exajoules.However,India keeps a slow and steady growth.Until 1991,total energy use in India was 10 exajoules.The steady was due to the steady domestic condition.
（二）
Sales of top five fast-food chains in 1996
The graph shows a rank of sales of top five fast-food chains in 1991,both domestic and overseas.
As indicated in the graph in the graph,McDonald's ranked first both in domestic and in overseas among the top five fast-food chains.McDonalds' domestic sale was $16.5 billion.Its sales in overseas was almost equal to the last number,$15.4 billion.Burger King was second to McDonald's in domestic,and in overseas it was the second one,too.The sales of Burger King in domestic and overseas were $7.5 billion and $11.8 billion.Compared with McDonald's and Burger King,the total sales of last three fast-food chains were less than the sales of McDonald's:the sales of Pizza Hut,Taco Bell and Wendy's were only $4.9 billion,$4.4 billion,and $4.3 billion in domestic and$2.5 billion,$0.5 billion,and $0.1 billion in overseas respectively.

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（一）
Total energy use in China,india and the U.S
This graph shows that the total energy have used in China,India and the U.S since 1970.
The United States used the most energy of three counties,and more than the combination of China and India.However,energy used in the U.S keep rising and falling before 1985.It didn't higher than 70 exajoules,and didn't lower than 60 exajoules.As far as its international relationship was concerned,The United states was unfriendly with some other countries.It has Cold War with Russian and something like that.The unsteady international condition let the U.S energy useing unsteady.However,The united states has become the most powerful country in the world since 1985,its energy useing keep steady increasing.
Compared with the U.S,China and India have a large population.Although the usage was keeping increasing from 1970 to 1991,its amount has a big distance with The United States.China did not growth quickly until 1975,for the new economic program,As a result,the usage were increased to 30 exajoules.However,India keeps a slow and steady growth.Until 1991,total energy useing in India was 10 exajoules.The steady was due to the steady domestic condition.
（二）
Sales of top five fast-food chains in 1996
The graph shows a rank of sales of top five fast-food chains in 1991,both domestic and overseas.
As indicated in the graph,McDonald's ranked first both in domestic and overseas among the top five fast-food chains.McDonalds' domestic sale was $16.5 billion.Its sales in overseas was almost equal to the last number,$15.4 billion.Burger King was second to McDonald's in domestic,and in overseas it was the second one,either.The sales of Burger King in domestic and overseas were $7.5 billion and $11.8 billion.Compared with McDonald's and Burger King,the total sales of last three fast-food chains were less than the sales of McDonald's:the sales of Pizza Hut,Taco Bell and Wendy's were only $4.9 billion,$4.4 billion,and $4.3 billion in domestic and$2.5 billion,$0.5 billion,and $0.1 billion in overseas respectively.