我写了一篇英语日记求我英语很差,写的比初中生还差,Idon`tgototheschoolintheafternoon.beacauseIdidn`tsleeptoplaycomputeruntil03:00amyesterdy.I`mverytierdnow,soIdecidetosleep,thengototheschool(我

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我写了一篇 英语日记 求
我英语很差,写的比初中生还差,
I don`t go to the school in the afternoon.beacause I didn`t sleep to play computer until 03:00 am yesterdy.I`m very tierd now ,so I decide to sleep,then go to the school (我的原意 是想写 我今天下午没去学校,因为我昨天晚上玩电脑到凌晨3点,我现在非常累,所以我决定先睡一觉再去学校） 1.对单词非常吃力,2.这个词语前要不要用 冠词 （school,afternoon) 语句结构有没错误 求前辈指教,怎么写好作文呢?每天都写日记 会进步么?还有 这篇日记该怎么优化?

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I didn't go to school in the afternoon beacause I stayed up to play computer games until 03:00 am yesterdy.I`m very tired now ,so I decided to go to sleep before I go to school.1.讲述过去发生的故事,全...