假如你是李华，曾经在美国留学三年，今年回国。你在Tutor.com网站上看到一则广告——现住北京的美国Smith夫妇想给他们的两个孩子找一个汉语家教。你很感兴趣，随即向Smith夫妇写一

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假如你是李华，曾经在美国留学三年，今年回国。你在Tutor.com网站上看到一则广告——现住北京的美国Smith夫妇想给他们的两个孩子找一个汉语家教。你很感兴趣，随即向Smith夫妇写一封正式英文书信。信的内容包括以下要点：

Location	北京
Name	李华
Email	[e-mail]
Strengths	● 母语是中文，可以说流利的英语 ● 有家教的经验 ● 热心、诚实、细心……
Questions	● 工作时间 ● 报酬

注意：1. 文章应包括表格里的所有信息，可适当发挥。Strengths（强项）
2. 信件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：100左右。

Answer 1

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith I am writing to apply for the job as a tutor which I saw advertised on the Tutor.com last week. I would be interested in teaching the children Chinese.I am a native Chinese speaker and I can speak fluent English because I studied in American for about three years. Due to my language skills I would have no difficulty in communicating with your children which is good for teaching. When I was in America I took a job as a tutor in my spare time so I know how to help solve the problems in Chinese learning.I feel that I can get on well with your children since I am always kind to my students. Besides I am patient with students though sometimes strict with them.I think I would be the right person you want. But I would like to know how long I shall work and what the payment is. Please contact me. My email is [e-mail] forward to your reply.Yours sincerely Li Hua 解析
分 析：
考查提纲类作文，本文本句简单，要点都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，在写作的时候注意使用高级的词汇如fluent等，也可以多使用合适的连接词what’s more besides等，让文章上下文更加流畅，更像是一个整体。同时要变换使用高级句型，以提升文章的层次和档次。
考点：
考查提纲类作文
点评：
提纲类作文要写出特色是很不容易的，一定要包括全部要点。同时变换使用多种句式，让文章宾语那么的平淡，增加文章的特色。