高中英语作文中学生做兼职工作的利弊TherehassomeadvantagesanddisadvantagesforstudentstotakePart-timejobs.AndIaskedmydassmateswhattheythinkaboutit.10precentofmyciassmatesthinktakingPart-timejobscanearnsom

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高中英语作文 中学生做兼职工作的利弊
There has some advantages and disadvantages for students to take Part-time jobs.And I asked my dassmates whatthey think about it.
10 precent of my ciassmates think taking Part-time jobs can earn some money and relive the family's burden.45 precent of my ciassmates think that taking Part-time jobs can increace our experiences and know the society,30 precent of myclassmates think taking par-time jobs spend more study time ,15 precent of my classmates think the students will be able to develop bad habits when theytake a part-time job .
I think taking part-time job is good for students .But it has some disadvantages,too.So when we take part-time job,weshoud find a good and healthy part-time job.
哪里写得不好 如果25 分可以得多少分

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另外,what think about it?可以改成?what about they think about it?最后一段帮你改一下： I think that it was do some part-time job better help of students knows money was important in your life,came back school you will focus on your study.But you cann't do more,you also was a student,so studied very well was your goals.我想做一些兼职的工作是更好的能够帮助学生知道学习的重要性,回到学校他们能够更加关注与学习.打死你,不要做太多,因为你还是个学生,学习的更好是你的学习目标.