小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改MEMynameisyeqi,I’mnine.Ihavetallbody,twobigeyes,twosmallearsandasmallmouth.Ilikebananas,yellow,monkey.Iamahappyboy.Ihaveabigbedroom.bedroomhaveatelephoneItgrey,twodeskIt

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小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改
ME
My name is ye qi,I’m nine.I have tall body,two big eyes,two small ears and a small mouth.I like bananas,yellow,monkey.I am a happy boy.
I have a big bedroom.bedroom have a telephone It grey,two desk It a brown a yellow,and two chair It black.
I have big family.My grandfather is funny and heavy.He has old face.He love apple.My grandmother is kindly old lady.She has big body.She love grape.My father is tall and strong.He has a big month.He loves pineapple.My mother is pretty.She has thin body.She likes peach.
My teacher is tall and thin.She has thin body.She To teach we English.My friend is cute and naughty.He has two small eyes and two big ears.He likes mango.
The pet is a handsome cat is me.It has big body and a long tail.It likes fish and mice.
I love family.

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I have tall body 虽然没语法错误 但是还有点怪怪的 改成 I am tall.I like bananas,yellow,monkey.monkey 可数名词加 sbedroom have a telephone It grey,it grey 主谓宾 缺少一个谓语 istwo desk It a brown a yel...