阅读下面的短文(内心感受)，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。InadditiontoteachinghereIalsoteachatasmallerhighschool17milesdownthefreewayfromwhereIlive．OnedayafewweeksagoIwas

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阅读下面的短文(内心感受)，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　In addition to teaching here I also teach at a smaller high school 17 miles down the freeway from where I live．One day a few weeks ago I was driving to that school when my car broke down just after I exited the freeway．I was only about a quarter of a mile away from the school so I grabbed my books and started walking．

　　“As soon as I got there I called a repairman to meet me at my car after class．One of my colleagues asked me what had happened．'This is my lucky day ' I replied smiling．”

　　“Your car breaks down and today is your lucky day?' She was puzzled．'What do you mean?'”

　　“I live 17 miles from here．' I replied．”My car could have broken down anywhere along the freeway．It didn't．Instead it broke down in the perfect place：off the freeway within walking distance of here．I'm still able to teach my class and I've been able to arrange for the repairman to meet me after class．If my car was meant to break down today it couldn't have been arranged in a more convenient fashion．”

　　I once read somewhere before that every morning when you get up you have a choice about how you want to approach life that day．And this is what I choose-to be cheerful．

[写作内容]

最近你感到学习压力很大 你的外籍老师对你讲述的自己的亲身经历。你准备在今天的日记中表达自己的感受。

1．以约30个词概括老师所讲述的这个故事的内涵；

2．以约120个词表达你内心的感受，并包括如下要点：

(1)你听完这个故事的感受；

(2)在你成长过程中你自己或他人用积极的态度去面对问题的某个经历；

(3)激励你自己正确面对学习压力。

[写作要求]

1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

答案：解析： 　　[评分标准] 　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 Possible version： Saturday may．22nd 2008 Dear diary 　　Today in class the teacher told us a story in which he was optimistic and maintained a positive attitude when his car broke down on his way to school． 　　I appreciate the teacher’s optimistic attitude to difficulty which allowed him to stay positive to perform his job well．If he didn’t do so this one problem would have turned into many other problems． 　　The story reminded me of waiting in line with Li Hua at the amusement park last summer．There were so many people waiting in line for boating and I felt upset at wasting so much time queuing．But Li Hua said with a smile “We haven’t seen each other for ages．I have so many wonderful things to tell you．Let’s share this precious chance to chat with each other．”It dawned on me that waiting in line was not a problem but an opportunity． 　　Now I’m determined to always be optimistic when I meet problems．Rather than think of study as a pressure I should see it as an opportunity to learn more about the world．