求高人修改所有的语法错误修改下面这篇文章的所有语法错误,和错误单词的搭配.WhenIwasstandingontheground,thesunshineissosharp,Iforcemyselftoopeneyes,sohard,andIfeeldizzy.I’maverymeanperson,inmy

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求高人修改所有的语法错误
修改下面这篇文章的所有语法错误,和错误单词的搭配.
When I was standing on the ground,the sunshine is so sharp,I force myself to open eyes,so hard,and I feel dizzy.
I’m a very mean person,in my heart,and my Mom’s either.
Just a few people knew what I really was.
I’m kind of nasty,no,I’m totally nasty,if I was really honest to face myself.
Until now,I know what I really am.
My mother told me that I’m a very timid girl.I can’t very kind to receive the world’s change and the people’s change.I’m always escape.No,I’m really good at escape.
Exactly,I’m a coward.It’s how to explain of “very timid”.
I realized,I’m not good,almost with bad.
I am sociable with everybody,except my parents and my sister.
I have never pretended myself to them.That’s the reason of why my Mom thought I was EW.
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OMG,我的50分啊..
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When I was standing on the ground,the （sunshine）sun (is)was so (sharp)blinding/glaring,I (force)forced myself to open my eyes,so hard,and I (feel)felt dizzy.
I’m a very mean person in my heart,and my Mom’s either.(你妈妈也不好?如果是则改成 and so is my mom.如果不是,则说but my mom is not)
Just a few people knew what I really was.
I’m kind of nasty.no,I’m totally nasty,if I was really honest to face myself.
（不明白你怎么能用mean 和 nasty 这两个词来形容自己,不明白.）
Until now,I know what I really am.(前两句听起来都不咋地道,不过语法没什么错误)
My mother told me that I’m a very timid girl.I can’t be (加be)very kind to （receive）accept the (world’s change and the people’s change.) changes of the world and people.I’m always (escape.)escaping.I’m really good at escape.
Exactly,I’m a coward.It’s how （to explain of “very timid”.）i explain "very timid".
I realized I’m not good,almost (with去掉) bad.
I am sociable with everybody,except my parents and my sister.
I have never pretended myself to them.不明白pretend oneself to sb 没见过这种说法） That’s the reason (of去掉) why my Mom thought I was EW
如果你把中文拿来让大家译,肯定会有人帮你的
修改,很麻烦的.虽然感觉有些不通顺,但你英文表达的意思不明确,不好改
再说你自己费劲写出来,给你改得遍体鳞伤的也过意不去啊