englishquestion,高手来呀!高一开学写的第一篇作文,希望大家能帮忙看看,改改,谢谢InternetInthemodernworld,Internethasbecomeanimportantpartofourlife,Itconnetstheworld.ourlifehasbeenchangedalotSincethein

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english question,高手来呀!
高一开学写的第一篇作文,希望大家能帮忙看看,改改,谢谢
Internet
In the modern world,Internet has become an important part of our life,
It connets the world.our life has been changed a lot Since the internet appeared.
It can help us learn more and work more effective,
It will add to our experience and increase our capacities.
somebody said,it just like our teacher and We won't spend a lot time finding things we want,The internet is helpful.
But others disagree,they think the internet is not as good as people
expect,We are not always learn from internet,we will concentrate
on computer games finally and don't want to study at all
,We will forfeit a lot of time by this.
It is obviously that the two points are both right.Everything has
two sides like coins.but,it depends on you!
So,i think the internet is a kind of useful tool,if you
use it properly,you will get a great help.

Answer 1

connets - connects
has been changed - has changed
since the internet appeared - since internet was invented
effective - effectively
experience - experiences
increase our capacities?
somebody said,- Someone said that
it just like - the internet is just like
won't spend a lot time finding things we want - don't need to spend a lot of time looking for things that we want
expect - imagined
learn - learning
internet - the internet
will concentrate on computer games finally - eventually we will concentrate only on comuter games
don't want to - won't want to
forfeit - waste
by this - on this
obviously - obvious
the two points - the two oppinions
but,it depends on you
a great help - great help