初三英语作文There'saheroineverybody'sheart.每个人心中都有一位英雄Howeverinmymindthereissuchahero.然而我心目中有这样一位英雄Hedidnotmaketheactofshakingheavenandearth.他并没有做出惊天动地

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初三英语作文
There's a hero in everybody's heart.每个人心中都有一位英雄
However in my mind there is such a hero.然而我心目中有这样一位英雄
He did not make the act of shaking heaven and earth.他并没有做出惊天动地的举动
But he is in my heart has been deeply imprinted.但他在我心中已经深深刻下了烙印
He is my father.他就是我的爸爸
When I failed in the exam,he always encourages me to continue.当我考试失败时,他总会鼓励我继续前进
When I was in danger,he will always protect me 当我处在危险之中,他总会来保护我
He is always my strong backing 他永远是我坚强的后盾
I love my dad,my hero 我爱我的爸爸,我的大英雄
大神求改作文

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There's a hero in everyone's heart. However, there is such a hero in my mind . He does not make the act that shakes the heaven or the earth. But he impresses deep in my heart. He is my father. Every time I fail in the exam, he always encourages me to continue. Whenever I am in danger, he will always protect me in time He is always my strong backing. I love my dad, my hero .
按照楼主的汉语意思,这是改完的版本.