求强人给我的托福作文打打分,提提建议Withthedevelopmentofsocityjumpsaproblemofinterestwhichconcentrateonwhethertheonlywayforenergyconservationisincreasingthepriceofgasolingandelectrictybygovernment.Asform

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求强人给我的托福作文打打分,提提建议
With the development of socity jumps a problem of interest which concentrate on whether the only way for energy conservation is increasing the price of gasoling and electricty by government.As for me,my scale of jugement will definitely incline the benefits of not choosing it as the only way.To be more accurate,I think do some advertisements and finding new energy sources might be better solutions to this problem.I think the following reasons and examples will support my idea.
On the top value comes my first point which focus on the effiency of advertisements.To be honest,the power of advertisements,not a despensive luxury,is a power of great strength and will surely have a unbelieveable influence on this area.Take the advertisements made by the government as a example.Widely accepted,these advertisements,when broadcasted on TVs,the number of people who watch it could made this view know by almost everyone,in with way the advertisements will show its effiency.Moreover,when people watch these advertisements,the advertisements more or less will have a influence on their mind and change their behaviors a little bit.Hopefully,if we add up with these changes,that will surely be a huge revolution in this society.
Nevertheless,the reproduceable energy,rather than a despenaive luxury,is a good way to solve the annoying problem of lacking energy.To be more accurate,these energy,with their own advantages,will definitely changes our life and benefits us in no time.
For instance,a recent research done by the magazine,one of the most famous magazine in China,have showed that more than 82 percent of the expert cliamed that the reproduceable energy may be an excellent way to educate people about the importance of saving energy,for the reproduceable energy will make people think that these tradional energy like gasoline and electricity are running out,and finally made them save energy for our earth.
What’s more,although these two are good ways for energy conservation,however,rising the price might be a good way.Frankly speaking,rising the price,will definitely lead to more cost on energy,which will “force” people to reduce the amount of energy they use.For instance,the rise of price will make some of the family cannot afford the increase and cut back on energy using and using some environmental-friendly ways to meet with their requirements.Such as,walk to work,close the light while there is nobody at home.Nonetheless,this will have a lasting effect on the environment and very importantly,the conservation.In this way,rising the price can have a good side effect on the topic of energy conservation.
From all the reasons and examples above,it is not hard to see that rising the price of the gasoline and electricty is a good way but not the best way to solve the problem of energy conservation.
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