跪求牛人修改会议学术通知,里面有语法和表达年月日的一些错误.NOTICETheStudentUnionwillholdamonthmeetinginthesixfloormeetingroom.Themeetingwillbeginat2:30PM（February15,2010afternoon2-3points）.thespeak

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跪求牛人修改会议学术通知,里面有语法和表达年月日的一些错误.
NOTICE
The Student Union will hold a month meeting in the sixfloor meeting room.The meeting will begin at 2:30PM（February 15,2010 afternoon 2-3 points）.the speaker is shandong university professor Mr.Jackson,Your will invite your friends take part in the meeting.
If you have some questions about Mount Everest,you can ask Prof.Liu for the answers.please remember that itis not allowed to have drinks as well asfood there.All the teachers and students are required to attend the meeting ontime.More discussion will be heldafter the meeting.
Wish you have a good time there,Welcomeeveryone to come!

Answer 1

Notice is hereby given that the monthly meeting of the Student Union will be held：

Date: 15 February 2010
Time: 2:30PM sharp
Venue：6th floor meeting room.
Speaker: Professor Jackson, Shandong University.


Note: Prof. Liu will answer questions about Mount Everest,
No food and drinks allowed、.
teachers and students: please be punctual, attendance is compulsory
Q & A session will continue after meeting.

All welcome

你说的太罗嗦了, 读到后段,前面的那一段也忘记了. 你应该用这样的格式,是一般的会议通知格式