求一个改错答案!急用DearBobHello,IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher.MissFang,I'dliketoyourpenfriendandgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,wher

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求一个改错答案!急用
Dear Bob
Hello,I learn about you from my English teacher.Miss Fang,I'd like to your penfriend and get to know moreabout your country.First,let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua.I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China.I wentto Hongqi Middle School.We study quite a few subject ,such as maths,Chinese,English and plysics.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time,but mow I am interesting in football.Do you play any ball games?What your favorite sport?I took forward
to hear from you soon.

Answer 1

1.,I learn about 改为I have learned about
2.I'd like to your penfriend 改为I'd like to be your penfriend
3.moreabout---more about
4.,let me tell you something more about ,去掉more,因为以前没有告诉过,不需要比较级.
5..I went to Hongqi Middle School,went改为go
6.We study quite a few subject改为subjects
7.I use to play ping-pong a lot 改为 I used to play ping-pong a lot
8.,but mow I am interesting in football改为,but now I am interested in football
9.I took forward to hear from you soon.改为I look forward to hearing from you soon.