帮忙英语作文改下TheSpringFestiveiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Therearetwowaystofun.Thefirstisstayathome.Ithinkstayathomeiscomfortableanditcostalittlemoney,butsomeoneth

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帮忙英语作文改下
The Spring Festive is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.There are two ways to fun.
The first is stay at home.I think stay at home is comfortable and it cost a little money,but someone think it is boring.It can't going through the outside and have no exprerance.
Well,I prefer like the first one,because I will study at home and it's the best way.

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The Spring Festive is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. There are two ways to fun.
The first is stay at home.(改成staying at home变成呆在家的动名词） I think staying(同上） at home is comfortable and it cost （改成saves,能节省些钱）a little money, but someone think it is boring. It can't going through the outside and have（改成has) no exprerance.
Well, I prefer like the first one, because I will study at home and it's the best way.(it's will be the best way因为前面说it will 将来式 所以这个也应该是 will be 格式）