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麻烦大家帮我修改文章的语病Prisonbreakwhichwasaamericandramathatshowedovertoday.it'ssuchanexcitinglovestroyandadventurstorythatihaveneverlovedamericndramalikethis.michealscofieldwasaimpressivenameineveryo
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麻烦大家帮我修改文章的语病
Prison break which was a american drama that showed over today.it's such an exciting love stroy and adventur story that i have never loved americn drama like this.micheal scofield was a impressive name in everyone's memory,even the ending of prison break he was died unfortunately.when i watched over the last action,i enter the BBS about prison break,i want to share and listen the feeling that from everyone's heart.we supposed micheal scofield was a seed to planted in our heart four years ago,and now it has grown a huge tree which could't be instead.
prison break had been accompanying with us for many years,do you remember that we used to wait for a week and just to see the forty minutes show,it's funny right,lol.
we should go to the correct way and do our business whatever prison break couldn't back again,but we should remember all of the face that appears in it.MICHEAL SCOFIELD ,LINCON BURROWS,SARA,MAHONE,SUCRE,LJ,KELLERMAN,BRAD BELLICK,JOHN ABRUZZI ...
Prison break which was a american drama that showed over today.it's such an exciting love stroy and adventur story that i have never loved americn drama like this.micheal scofield was a impressive name in everyone's memory,even the ending of prison break he was died unfortunately.when i watched over the last action,i enter the BBS about prison break,i want to share and listen the feeling that from everyone's heart.we supposed micheal scofield was a seed to planted in our heart four years ago,and now it has grown a huge tree which could't be instead.
prison break had been accompanying with us for many years,do you remember that we used to wait for a week and just to see the forty minutes show,it's funny right,lol.
we should go to the correct way and do our business whatever prison break couldn't back again,but we should remember all of the face that appears in it.MICHEAL SCOFIELD ,LINCON BURROWS,SARA,MAHONE,SUCRE,LJ,KELLERMAN,BRAD BELLICK,JOHN ABRUZZI ...
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1 a american drama -an
2 stroy-story
3 adventur-adventure
4 have never loved americn drama like this是想表达从来没有像这样喜欢一部美剧是吗?这样表达不妥应该成The most +形容词 I have ever seen 这样更符合英语习惯,而不chinglish.
5 a impressive name -an 楼主冠词要留意,元音音节前+an
6 even-although这里你是想说尽管的意思吧
7 enter-entered 过去式
8 want-wanted
9 listen- listen to 听什么是listen to ,比如listen to music
10 michael scofield-人名首字母大写
11 a seed to planted-a seed which was planted
12 instead-instead of
13 wait for a week and just to see- wait for a week just to see就是去掉and
14 whatever prison break couldn't back -even though prison break couldn't be back
15 face-faces
错误还真不少,继续努力吧,PS本人也喜欢Prison Break
2 stroy-story
3 adventur-adventure
4 have never loved americn drama like this是想表达从来没有像这样喜欢一部美剧是吗?这样表达不妥应该成The most +形容词 I have ever seen 这样更符合英语习惯,而不chinglish.
5 a impressive name -an 楼主冠词要留意,元音音节前+an
6 even-although这里你是想说尽管的意思吧
7 enter-entered 过去式
8 want-wanted
9 listen- listen to 听什么是listen to ,比如listen to music
10 michael scofield-人名首字母大写
11 a seed to planted-a seed which was planted
12 instead-instead of
13 wait for a week and just to see- wait for a week just to see就是去掉and
14 whatever prison break couldn't back -even though prison break couldn't be back
15 face-faces
错误还真不少,继续努力吧,PS本人也喜欢Prison Break
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