纠正英文语法错误Wecitizen,shouldalwaysconformconstitution,everyoneofusneedtoknowtheconceptsofthelaw,andneverbechildishundersomekindsofcircumstances.Achievedreamsanddocontributionforsociety.Befriendlywithcompetit

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纠正英文语法错误
We citizen,should always conform constitution,everyone of us need to know the concepts of the law,and never be childish under some kinds of circumstances.Achieve dreams and do contribution for society.Be friendly with competitors,be conscientious with things,try to cooperate with others.Treat colleagues sincerely,be amiable with olds and children,never be cunning like a fox,get closeness from others,never be a criminal,when make mistakes,admit it at once.Never be a critic,never laugh at people around us.When it's needed,comfort others with heart,regards is important.Never urge others to do something bad.Learn to appreciate others.
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We citizens,should always conform constitution.Everyone of us needs to know the concept of law,and never be childish under some kinds of circumstances.Achieving dreams and doing contribution for society.Be friendly with competitors,be conscientious with things,and be cooperate with others.Treating colleagues sincerely,being amiable with the olders and children,never being as cunning as a fox,getting closeness from others.we should never be a criminal.After making mistakes,we should admit them immediately.we shouldn't be a critic,and laugh at people around us.when it's needed,comforting others with heart because caring others is important.we should never urge someone to do something illegal.we should learn to appreciate others.