求帮忙改语法错误.Chinahasenteredthepopulationagingsociety,itwillbeonChina'ssocialeconomic,politicalfar-reachingimpact.Andourcountry'scurrentendowmentinstitutionsinourcountryisfarlowerthantheneeds,socialendowments

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求帮忙改语法错误.
China has entered the population aging society,it will be on China's social economic,political far-reaching impact.And our country's current endowment institutions in our country is far lower than the needs,social endowment services system,has become more and more attention,the social expect to solve urgently major problems of people's livelihood.Based on the situation of our country,the development of community endowment model suitable for China,it will give us a feasible way to solve this problem.
中国已进入人口老龄化社会,它将对中国的社会经济、政治产生深远的影响。而我国目前的养老机构远远低于我国的需求，社会养老服务体系建设，越来越成为社会广泛关注、群众迫切期待解决的重大民生问题。立足于我国国情，发展适合我国的社区养老模式，将为我们解决这一问题提供一条可行的出路。
用中文翻译的

Answer 1

根据楼主中文的意思,我把译文整理如下,不是简单说那几处做了改动,因为预期一点一点说不清楚,不如做整体修正,希望楼主采纳
China has entered the population aging society,and it will be a far-reaching impact on China's social economic and politics.But current endowment institutions in our country is far lower than the needs,social endowment services system is becoming well-concerning focus and the major problems of people's livelihoodsocial expect to solve urgently.Based on the situation of our country,the development of community endowment model suitable for China will give us a feasible way to solve this problem.